Read it and review please. Just got finished writing it 10 minutes ago, so be nice. :)
By the way, I'm well aware it sounds slightly emo. And some might misconstrue certain statements in that piece as critical of the song in question. Let me be clear: this is not critical of any Frost* song in any way, shape or form. Let's see how many of you can guess the song. ;)
http://novelboy.deviantart.com/art/Car-Ride-1-104387658 (http://novelboy.deviantart.com/art/Car-Ride-1-104387658)
It's not that bad....is it? :(
Well, we have a life outside enjoying Frost :shock: but I really liked this. I am still not sure which feeling / mood you were trying to capture but I guess the song is Hyperventilate since there is no mentioning of vocals?
It is indeed. And the piece, in retrospect, is a bit crap. I tried to do too many things at once.