Author Topic: RWA - ELEVEN  (Read 3200 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline RWA

  • Fig Roll
  • *******
  • Posts: 990
    • View Profile
    • http://www.ronaldwahle.com
RWA - ELEVEN
« on: November 10, 2011, 04:20:43 PM »
A 'no keys, just guitars' track celebrating the new additions to my studio called ELEVEN.

Ibanez S470L guitar (with DiMarzio picks)

Yamaha BBN5L-II bass


That's eleven strings in total. Hence the brilliant title!  ;)
 
Also the first time in 12 years I play the bass again myself.
One part of me thinks this track is done. The other part of me want to put in more stuff.
But I'd like to avoid using keys for this one. What do you think?!

Offline johninblack

  • Global Moderator
  • A Zoo full of Chocolate Animals
  • *****
  • Posts: 2318
    • View Profile
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2011, 11:03:57 PM »
I'm getting an error, it goes to box.net but says file unavailable or been removed.
"F#?K OFF, GRANDAD!!!!"

Offline RWA

  • Fig Roll
  • *******
  • Posts: 990
    • View Profile
    • http://www.ronaldwahle.com
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2011, 06:44:27 AM »
Quote from: "johninblack"
I'm getting an error, it goes to box.net but says file unavailable or been removed.
Fixed! Try again.  :)

Offline johninblack

  • Global Moderator
  • A Zoo full of Chocolate Animals
  • *****
  • Posts: 2318
    • View Profile
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2011, 11:26:28 AM »
I  can understand you wanting to add to it, I would therefore issue the challenge of adding but NO KEYBOARDS!!
Tbh I think it's rather good as it is now and nice bass work!!
"F#?K OFF, GRANDAD!!!!"

Offline RWA

  • Fig Roll
  • *******
  • Posts: 990
    • View Profile
    • http://www.ronaldwahle.com
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2011, 03:39:28 PM »
Quote from: "johninblack"
I  can understand you wanting to add to it, I would therefore issue the challenge of adding but NO KEYBOARDS!!
Tbh I think it's rather good as it is now and nice bass work!!
Thanks.  :)

As said, one day it feels finished .... the other day it doesn't. Usually I add keys to fill it up but I don't want to this time.....  :|

Offline fitzy

  • Bourbon Cream
  • ***
  • Posts: 270
    • View Profile
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #5 on: November 11, 2011, 05:11:42 PM »
Nice one,...enjoyed that ;)
M,lady....please come down off that roof!!

Offline E.S.

  • Cadbury's Boaster
  • ********
  • Posts: 1072
    • View Profile
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #6 on: November 11, 2011, 06:56:18 PM »
Ooh! Lots of lovely riffage. I liketh it, sir.  :D

Offline D S

  • Iced Gem
  • *********
  • Posts: 1604
    • View Profile
    • http://www.myspace.com/wednesdaywithoutwoe
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #7 on: November 11, 2011, 07:29:03 PM »
Another goodie there Ron - agree about the riffage.  I think it works well as it is - it's a bit different from your usual material due to the lack of keys but it works with the guitars being given space.  Maybe a YYZ style string pad at 3:40-ish at most but otherwise I think you're done.
Except for some bassoon obviously.  ;)
Come on, you\'re a lion!

Offline RWA

  • Fig Roll
  • *******
  • Posts: 990
    • View Profile
    • http://www.ronaldwahle.com
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #8 on: November 12, 2011, 09:34:28 AM »
Quote from: "D S"
 Maybe a YYZ style string pad at 3:40-ish at most but otherwise I think you're done.
Except for some bassoon obviously.  ;)
No keys! I said NO KEYS!  :shock:

:lol:

Offline Mikey

  • A Zoo full of Chocolate Animals
  • **********
  • Posts: 4844
    • View Profile
    • http://www.polarisworldgolfinspain.co.uk
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #9 on: November 12, 2011, 11:49:09 AM »
Another cracking contibution.
If you feel the need to tinker with it my suggestion would be bring the guitars up a bit
Balance sounds a little better towards the end of the track
I used to have a signature

Offline L33VEY

  • Cadbury's Boaster
  • ********
  • Posts: 1010
  • In the Frostiverse*, patience is a requirement
    • View Profile
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #10 on: November 12, 2011, 12:25:09 PM »
Guitar porn!   :twisted:
Currently playing in The Frost*mobile:  Pendragon - Love Over Fear

Offline RWA

  • Fig Roll
  • *******
  • Posts: 990
    • View Profile
    • http://www.ronaldwahle.com
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #11 on: November 13, 2011, 09:57:59 AM »
Quote from: "Mikey"
Another cracking contibution.
If you feel the need to tinker with it my suggestion would be bring the guitars up a bit
Balance sounds a little better towards the end of the track
K, thanks. I'll look into that.
btw, what's a contibution?  ;)

I'll leave it alone for now. I've heard the damn thing 100+ times now. I'll get back to it later.  :)

Offline Mikey

  • A Zoo full of Chocolate Animals
  • **********
  • Posts: 4844
    • View Profile
    • http://www.polarisworldgolfinspain.co.uk
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #12 on: November 13, 2011, 08:03:44 PM »
Quote from: "RWA"
btw, what's a contibution?

That would be a post interupted by kids pestering :cry:
I used to have a signature

Offline RWA

  • Fig Roll
  • *******
  • Posts: 990
    • View Profile
    • http://www.ronaldwahle.com
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #13 on: December 20, 2011, 10:03:15 AM »
Officially released now : ELEVEN



I've revisited the track several times in the last month but couldn't find anything substantial to add. Which in my world means..... it's done!  :D

Offline mattstevens

  • A soggy bit left in the cup
  • **
  • Posts: 33
    • View Profile
Re: RWA - ELEVEN
« Reply #14 on: December 20, 2011, 11:02:07 AM »
Nice man, like the guitars in the middle, quite classic Rush, always a good thing.