The Tale of a Fisherman lost at Sea. New Song/ Video! Feedback welcome :)

[Muso1070]

Hello everyone
Here's a new song called I'll Be Home.
The video is about a fisherman who loves & hates life on the Ocean and was all shot in 4K HD quality.
We had so much fun making this, it was a real adventure and id love to hear any comments or feedback good or bad.
Feel free to share also if you enjoyed

I'll Be Home (Official Video)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGbNRNbQN4g

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[Muso1070]

Anyone care to leave me a comment or feedback?
Would love to hear from you guys :-)

[lyn]

Floated my boat!

[ich_bin_besser]

Well, you know: it's always hard for forum members to comment on posts that only refer to one's own songs. Some call it spamming... To me: nice music that does not hurt anyone.
But the fact that you return to this forum might mean that you are a fan of Frost* - or aren't you?

[Muso1070]

Floated my boat!

Hey good to hear you enjoyed :-)

[Muso1070]

Well, you know: it's always hard for forum members to comment on posts that only refer to one's own songs. Some call it spamming... To me: nice music that does not hurt anyone.
But the fact that you return to this forum might mean that you are a fan of Frost* - or aren't you?

Frost*ies is a great form yes.
It would be spam if i posted something and never returned or replyed to anyone.
Love to hear other peoples thoughts and criticisms as well.

[Muso1070]

Free song Download here :-)

https://www.facebook.com/chriskeysofficial

[tigermoth]

Hi Muso1070. Sorry I did actually listen to this when I first saw it a couple of weeks back, and I thought I'd posted a reply but it isn't here for some reason. Can't speak for the vid as I'm blind, but its a great ditty. Lovely vibe and idea and everything sounds great, guitar and vox etc. Is that a Kajon I hear? Good stuff. And as for it being spam, I'm definitely guilty of a certain amount of self advertising on here so I couldn't possibly comment.

[Muso1070]

Hi Muso1070. Sorry I did actually listen to this when I first saw it a couple of weeks back, and I thought I'd posted a reply but it isn't here for some reason. Can't speak for the vid as I'm blind, but its a great ditty. Lovely vibe and idea and everything sounds great, guitar and vox etc. Is that a Kajon I hear? Good stuff. And as for it being spam, I'm definitely guilty of a certain amount of self advertising on here so I couldn't possibly comment.

Hello there :-)

Cheers for the great comment.
Indeed it is a Cajon drum good ear you got.
Glad you enjoyed thank again.

Cheers

[Muso1070]

Here's the lyrics for this track for those who like to think about the story etc :-)

I'll Be Home Lyrics
V1 I've been torn by the rain and snow
my hands filled with cracks so old
every scar is a place and time
a fight on the ocean line
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
I rise with the sound of hope
but fear i've still far to go
my mind broken down by the winds
a soul black and blue worn thin
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
But one of these tides..........

C1 Ill be home.......
No more nights drifting on my own
Ill be home.......
Living life with my feet on stone
But on of these tides..........
Ill be home....... Home.........

V2 I can't see past the waves and fog
my face bruised and beaten so raw
every task is a chore and climb
this war i've been faced is mine
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
I wait for my time to come
but now i've got work needs done
those dreams deep within my heart
one day a new place to start
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
But one of these tides..........

C2 Ill be home.......
No more nights drifting on my own
Ill be home.......
Living life with my feet on stone
But one of these tides..........
Ill be home....... Home.........
Home........ Home.........

[Muso1070]

Anyone else got some comments or feedback?